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Phones can ruin people's lives because of digital distractions. A digital distraction can be a simple vibration or a notification causing people to stop everything just to check it. And in worse cases it could kill.
For example in the article it states that “ 58% of pedestrian deaths are people under the age of 19 “ -( lewis 6 ) Experts believe these events are due to digital distractions and zero awareness.
There is no doubt having a cell phone is a huge asset. Being in a emergency situation or to keep in touch with family and friends. But this small device has all people's attention and their lives slowly becomes distorted.
To summarize it phones basically could fry people's brains due to the unfortunate events. But not everyone is going to walk off a bridge or walk into a poll.
R, cell phones are frying your brain because .
A, people have the technology now that everyone is addicted to phones .
C,, for example this acticle states " 53 hours amount of time the average teenager spends in front of a screen per week. ( Cristin Lewis pg 8)
E, in this quote , it says teens are practically addicted to there phones.
There is 24 hours in one day and 48 in two that is 2 days and 5 hours spending on playing games, texting , scrolling on Twitter or Instagram there is so much more that we could do with time
S, therefor cell phones are frying your brain.
No, cell phone are not “frying our brains” because they can be very useful to help us connect with our friends and can be used as a valuable learning tool. Cell phones play an important role in today’s society when speed of sending and receiving information is convenient for people with busy lives.
In the text it states that "If you needed to call mom because band practice was cancelled, you would have to find a payphone (and hope you had a quarter to put in the slot). If there was no payphone you sat and waited for your mom even if it was pouring rain”. The quote is important because it tells how the cell phone has made everything easier, instead of inserting quarter after quarter into a payphone you can make a call or text with no worries on your smart phone.
Cell phones allow us to stay connected to our parents at anytime and would be very useful in case of emergency.
If you use cell phones responsibly they can be an amazing tool. A cell to help us connect to friends even when you are out on the go. A cell phone can be used quickly search for information which is important when researching for a project.
Cell phones are not frying our brains because you can use them as a great tool for communication and research.
R&A - Cellphones are not frying our brains because in todays society, social media teaches us the same, if not more than schools do.
C- For example, in the article is states that "homework takes too long" (Kristen Lewis 7).
E - In this quote , it is present that ourcellphones allow us to go on our phones and send in our homework via email instead of writing it all down and handing it in the next day. it is much more time saving and efficient.
S - Even though cellphones do have their cons, they also give us an easier look at life. Social media like Instagram can show us millions of photos from all around the world! Cellphones offer an amazing technological view at anything and everything.
no cell phones are not frying brains because it helps us stay connected in many ways. For example in the article it talks about how people are killed by cars and concussed by poles but that is only because they let themselves be distracted not the phones fault.In this quote it explains that it helps society “the world helps us all stay connected”(kristin lowis 5). why does this matter? well the the importance of this is found in when and where people use these phones. so people die because they are not very smart at when or where they used it so it is their fault. And that people can use it to help them complete projects faster and they allow research to make people smarter and get info faster. so in conclusion cell phones can have a healthy relationship.
R-No phone are not frying brains because.
A-They help people connect with others.
C-For example in the article it states "Few people would deny that life today is more convenient information-rich connected than it's been at any point in human history.If you're stranded in the rain all you have to do is text your mom to come to rescue you"(Kristin Lewis 6,7).
E-In quote that is really easy to connect and not wait for hours and people can just text call and the person can get it really quick especially When it is an emergency.
The important because it not only helps people to connect but also know stuff that are happening to the world on tv but why watch tv when people can watch YouTube and Safari on their phones.
S-Therefore phone are not frying brains.
R- yes phones are frying brains because
A- people are dying because of phones and no one is doing anything about this.
C- for example in the article it states that"58% of pedestrian deaths are kids under 19. Experts believe these tragedies are mainly due to digital distractions"(Lewis 6).
E- in this quote, it is presented that kids die often because of technology. If kids would leave their phones at home this would not happen.
S- So yes phones are frying kids brains.
R- Phones are not frying brains because
A- they are a great way of accessing information.
C- For example in the article it states "... life today is more convenient, information-rich, and connected than it is been at any point in human history" (Lewis, 5).
E- This quote shows that nowadays people have the option to acess information through their phones that is always available for them and stay connected with others. This is important because communicating with friends and family helps their relationship grow bigger and stronger.
S- Therefore, phones are not frying brains.
Yes, phones are frying brains because they take away your time to enjoy whats around you and they cause a lot of harmful accidents to the brain and yourself.
For example it states in the artical "you are at high risk for distraction-related accidents" (Christian Louis pg 6). You always see people looking down on there phones and that could cause many bad accidents.
In videos you see people looking down on there phones and they sometimes walk into poles, fountains or rudely bump into people while starring at there screens. Having a smart drys the brain because people are always on them and they are so addicted that they can spend 2-3 hours on there devices without realizing
In conclusion phones are a bad habit and the more your on them the more addicted you'll get.
R- Cell phones are frying brains because...
A- Now a days young adolescents are to attached to their phones to pay attention to potential danger.
C- For example in the article it states "Are smart phones making us dumber?" (Forbes Brandvoice 5)
E- In the text it talks about the teens that were too distracted by their phones to pay attention to the danger they got themselves into. Understanding that accidents can happen but in this case it was careless mistakes.
S- Therefore cells are in fact ruining lives.
R/A- phones are not frying brains because technology is helping people.
C- in the article it states that "who could have imagined that one day there would be a palmed sized device that you could use to call home, watch tv shows take pictures and access information" (lewis 6).
E- this is important because technology has helped humans advance. but the problem is people not knowing when to use technology. whether it is crossing the street or sitting in class.
S- no phones are not frying brains, people just need to know when the proper time to use them is.
R/A. Technology is somewhat frying teens brains because kids are getting clumsy with their phones resulting in injury or death.
C. For example, in the article it states that "Christina stepped into the crosswalk and was struck by a car. She later died in the hospital." This accident was caused by her using a smart phone.
E. In this quote, the average teen spends about about 53 hours per week on some form of technology. This is important because that is a lot of time and it is ruining teens brains.
S. In conclusion, kids should look out and pay attention to what is going on around them.
technology is not frying our brains because we simply depend on them they help us to learn with the internet,music and games our phones help us to find info easily.
I believe that our phones are only helping us to learn and solve problems also it helps us communicate to other people
R Technology is frying teens brains because
A They are taking away people's surroundings and making them hurt, look foolish and getting them killed.
C for example "58% of pedestrian deaths are kids under 19. Experts believe these tragedies are mainly due to digital distractions"(lewis 6).
E This quote means that teens are not aware of their surroundings when they're on there phones. This also means that “58% of pedestrian deaths are kids” means that a lot of kids are on there phone everyday.
S So in conclusion kids are not being aware of their surroundings and they are getting themselves killed.
Are Cell Phones Frying Our Brains?
R/A No, cell phones are not literally frying the brains of those who use them, but figuratively they are, because people make poor decisions around the use of them which can lead to serious accidents and injuries.
C In the text it states that "58% of pedestrian deaths are kids under 19. Experts believe these tragedies are mainly due to digital distraction" (Safe Kids Worldwide, 2014).
E People get distracted by their phones when walking or driving and then get into accidents that result in serious injury. The decision to use a cell phone while driving or even walking shows poor judgement.
S Therefore, constantly using a cell phone has an effect on people's thinking process.
R. Phones are not affecting brains
A. Because there only helping them it has a built in calculator the Internet in your it pretty much has every book in the world in your pocket.
C. Phones in some ways can be bad if it is a main priority it could take affect to brains but in the case of moderate uses it is very helpful and is great for entertainment like music,YouTube and even movies
E. For example ("Who could imagine that one day there would be a palm sized device that you could use to call home, take pictures,watch TV shows and access information.
S. Therefore phones are pretty amazing
They do every thing and there okay as long as they're not used 24 7.
Is your phone frying your brain?
R- Phones are not frying brains because
A- Phones are a great way to be entertained
C- For example, in the article it states that "it used to be that boredom was a part of life" (Lewis, 8).
E- In this quote, it proves that phones are not frying brains by stating it is a great way to be entertained through a small screen. This is important because phones are a great way to get stuff done such as E-mails, text messages, teachers websites, phone calls and much more.
S- Therefore, phones are not frying brains.
S/T. Rick Grimes "character from the walking dead" speaks as if he is always is about to die and that every thing is about survival. After everything Rick Grimes has been through he is now dead inside.
E. The affects Rick Grimes has on people is he is the person helping them survive. He is the people's leader.
A. Rick Grimes behaves like everything is a mission. He has gotten a little cocky over the fact he has survived so long.
L. The character wears dirty clothes and looks like he hasn't showered in forever.
(S) The way Robert Freeman speaks leads me to believe that he is tired and doesn't care about life.
(T) The things Robert thinks about and his thoughts lead me to believe that he is a very angry person and wants to beat his grandchildren. But still kinda loves them a little.
(E) The way other characters react to Robert leads me to believe that he is not good in social situations. Because he is always messing up his chances with women, and making enemies.
(A) The actions Robert does, and his behavior, leads me to believe that he doesn't care what other people think. Ex, beating other people kids in public, beating his grand-kids, fighting a blind man.
(L) The way Robert dresses leads me to believe he is very cheap and does not like to spend too much money. He dresses in cheap clothes and wears the same thing everyday.
RACE Quiz Correction
R:Yes sports fans do go too far because
A:They hurt other people.
C:For example,in the article it states that "There have been out-of-control fans for as long as there have been sporting events.In the sixth century,fans of the Chariot races in Constantinople were incensed when some of the races were imprisoned.The fans burned the city and tried to over throw the emperor;30,000 people died"(Apple 10).
E:In this quote,it represents how the fans hurt others by doing stupid stuff that injure others who are around them and just because of sports.Others go to prison because some of the actually kill others.
This is important because they also destroy others people properties that people own or the government raise a lot money and hard work to build this buildings like Constantinople they burned.
S:If then they do not stop the sports all around the world will get burned.
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